Thursday, November 5, 2009

Beetle Light

As the street-light spanked the night
beetles darted then froze upon
hearing high heels clickety-click
on route to another dead-end trick

stained red lip-stick round
another dick-head
reminder of pleasure found
out of reach in their wife's bed

yellow casted glow
complimented hard lines,
trophies awarded for stress;
survival of insecure times

dead insects spotted the walk,
as she tramped through the night;
fighting beetles for the light

5 comments:

  1. hello, darling.
    Oh, this is crunchy.
    your first line is a saucy hook.

    shoe scrapings
    is a fitting ending.

    I have missed you.
    Miss R.

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  2. hi regina. fascinating poim. Love the first and last S's. Look forward to seeing more.

    david

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  3. This is a different voice for you, Regina. I like it, and I have also missed you.

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  4. regina,

    This is fantastic.

    I love the voice and imagery.

    seraph

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  5. there are some good lines in this,
    especially the last

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