A green and gold meadow, nature not having decided wheth-
er she ought be late summer or mid autumn and having scat-
tered tulip leaves atop a brook most fair and cool, I found one
fine day and thereupon the bank lay a most beautiful girl
asleep
(as I guessed she was)
clad only in a vest of such see-through linen that it scarce
in any measure veiled the cherry of her breasts-- and below
her waist nought but an apron most in a whisp, light texture;
and likewise dressed, at her feet, there slept two girls and a
boy-- her slaves,
(as I guessed),
for no sooner did I catch this sight, than the Princess
( as I guessed she was)
turned in her sleep
(as I again guessed she was)
to her back, cried out words I had never heard, and spread
her legs
(as I guessed she did).
I really don't know anything about this lovely scene be-
cause I was in a barn tending to a sick horse thousands of
miles away.
**
A green and gold meadow, nature having decided that she
is late summer and having scattered tulip leavesatop a brook
most fair and cool, I found one fine day and thereupon the
bank lay a most beautiful girl asleep
(as I knew she was because I yelled words I didn't know I
knew right in her right ear)
clad only in a vest of such seethrough linen that it scarce
in any measure veiled the cherry of her breasts-- and be-
low her waist nought but an apron most in a whisp, light
texture; and likewise dressed, at her feet, there slept two
girls and a boy-- her slaves
(as I knew they were because their faces had been brand-
ed XXX with a red-hot iron)
for no sooner did I catch this sight than the Princess
( as I knew she was because she wore a little crown stud-
ded with diamonds. I knew they were diamonds because
I had worn something similiar when I was the girl Prin-
cess of Karlsbad)
turned in her sleep, cried out words I had never heard
(again I knew she was asleep for when she spread her legs
I dropped my lips to that most delicious place and she stir-
red only slightly and sighed ........ )
I do know everything about this lovely scene because I
was in my den watching it on a XXX dvd-- but that's all
I know because the electricity went out-- right at that
last moment mentioned above.
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That was layered and layered. It drew me right in and refused to let go.
ReplyDeleteI like the refrain format and I was floored by the unexpected ending and jump to the future.
A fine piece. One I will return to for my own benefit of loosing myself. Like Hello Moon where the text departed the page.
Dallas,
ReplyDeleteSometime ago, a writing instructor at
Iowa University told our class,
"Repeat and layer!"
I confess I forgot about that advice and started 'repeating and layering' all by
myself. Then I remembered the advice.
I don't know where my 'plotless' writing
came from.
Hey! thanks a lot for your good words.
Much appreciated.
I mispelled palinurus above.
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You have a hypnotic way with words.
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