Monday, October 26, 2009

A green and gold meadow, nature not having decided wheth-
er she ought be late summer or mid autumn and having scat-
tered tulip leaves atop a brook most fair and cool, I found one
fine day and thereupon the bank lay a most beautiful girl
asleep

(as I guessed she was)

clad only in a vest of such see-through linen that it scarce
in any measure veiled the cherry of her breasts-- and below
her waist nought but an apron most in a whisp, light texture;
and likewise dressed, at her feet, there slept two girls and a
boy-- her slaves,

(as I guessed),

for no sooner did I catch this sight, than the Princess

( as I guessed she was)

turned in her sleep

(as I again guessed she was)

to her back, cried out words I had never heard, and spread
her legs

(as I guessed she did).

I really don't know anything about this lovely scene be-
cause I was in a barn tending to a sick horse thousands of
miles away.
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A green and gold meadow, nature having decided that she
is late summer and having scattered tulip leavesatop a brook
most fair and cool, I found one fine day and thereupon the
bank lay a most beautiful girl asleep

(as I knew she was because I yelled words I didn't know I
knew right in her right ear)

clad only in a vest of such seethrough linen that it scarce
in any measure veiled the cherry of her breasts-- and be-
low her waist nought but an apron most in a whisp, light
texture; and likewise dressed, at her feet, there slept two
girls and a boy-- her slaves

(as I knew they were because their faces had been brand-
ed XXX with a red-hot iron)

for no sooner did I catch this sight than the Princess

( as I knew she was because she wore a little crown stud-
ded with diamonds. I knew they were diamonds because
I had worn something similiar when I was the girl Prin-
cess of Karlsbad)

turned in her sleep, cried out words I had never heard

(again I knew she was asleep for when she spread her legs
I dropped my lips to that most delicious place and she stir-
red only slightly and sighed ........ )

I do know everything about this lovely scene because I
was in my den watching it on a XXX dvd-- but that's all
I know because the electricity went out-- right at that
last moment mentioned above.

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palinirus 
 

3 comments:

  1. That was layered and layered. It drew me right in and refused to let go.
    I like the refrain format and I was floored by the unexpected ending and jump to the future.
    A fine piece. One I will return to for my own benefit of loosing myself. Like Hello Moon where the text departed the page.

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  2. Dallas,

    Sometime ago, a writing instructor at
    Iowa University told our class,

    "Repeat and layer!"

    I confess I forgot about that advice and started 'repeating and layering' all by
    myself. Then I remembered the advice.

    I don't know where my 'plotless' writing
    came from.

    Hey! thanks a lot for your good words.

    Much appreciated.

    I mispelled palinurus above.
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  3. You have a hypnotic way with words.

    seraph

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